martes, 30 de agosto de 2016

Jhonny`s changes.

In this case the assigment of litetarute poetry was:

Choose ONE of the following subjects to write a poem in a minimum of 12 lines. Arrange the division in stanzas as you please, decide if it will rhyme or not and choose a suitable title.

A) A poem that tells what love is according to you. (As in "Song")
B) A poem which shows a discussion between two characters. (As in "The Clod and the Pebble")
C) A poem describing a revelation or a change of state (As in "Passion")

Publish it in your blogs with a proper title, introduction and picture. Check for spelling, grammar, everything!!
Labels: literature, 2016, poetry, 3ºsec (or 3ºA).

In connection to the options I choose the option A " A poem that tells what love is acording to me"
I hope you like it.


Jhonny have many problems. 
He have now a perception and he think that he is older.
Jhonny don`t have girlfriend
even he don`t have a friend.


2 weeks later Jhonny know a girl called Anna.
Anna understand Jhonny`s problems, 
She help him to change, 
but Jhonny don`t want any help.N
ow Anna keep`s insisting.

Anna keep`s trying,
Now Jhonny have reconsiderate his life. 
Anna and Jhonny are cheerful aftera long time, 
and a difficult effort.


1 comentario:

  1. It´s a good idea to create two characters to tell a story. This is what we would call a narrative poem. Well done.
    However, there are some spelling, grammar and typing mistakes you could have checked before publishing.
    Eg: The name Johnny isn´t properly spelt.
    The "s" is missing in many verbs: "Johnny has many problems" "he thinks he is older" "Johnny doesn´t have a girlfriend", etc.
    A picture is also missing, so as to complete your entry.

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